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You open your eyes
For the first time
This life
Ain't what it seems
To be
Heart beating too fast

You make a few steps
Unsure where to go
Safety
Means standing still
Up in the air
And know you can't fall

Someone reaching for your hand
A gentle touch
A whisper
Telling you the secret of love
Mankind only knows
Heart beating at last
for you

you're inspiring


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izzycoolest Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
This is amazing, no lie. i wish i could write like this <3
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
did you try? I think everyone can write, if they want to :)
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AskaDora Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
i don't know what inspired you, but it is beautiful. while reading this im trying to understand who are u writing about...
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
well, I don't use to talk about the meaning or the inspiration of my creations. but let me put it like this: think about what it means to you, because that's what the poem is about. it's not about the artist, it's about what the reader sees in it.
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MariiChan36 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
This is lovely :)
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
thanks :)
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finishyourtea Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Writer
Lovely work! The lines flowed very well. =)
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
thank you very much :hug:
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BurningBlair Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist
I think this poem is lovely ... ^^
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
thanks
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1121113 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011
The picture got clearer at the end of your poetry, and I perhaps I could relate to your words, more or less. I loved the line "safety means standing still up in the air", such a poetic imagery. I hope you'd feel like this quite often, its rare to feel so. Careful with your heart, shield it well.
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011
Thanks a lot for reading and for feedback :hug:
I am glad you found a line you like. I do that too, searching for a special line in poems I read. There's someone special who makes me feel that way when I am with him and currently he is the one guarding my heart :)
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GrauWeiss Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
The poem is absolutely lovely! :huggle:
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andrea-ioana Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
:blush:

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